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Learning outcomes

Students will:

  • recognize organizational patterns.
  • analyze the effectiveness of these patterns.
  • implement these patterns in original children’s books.

Teacher planning

Time required for lesson

1 Hours

Materials/resources

Activities

Modeling/Mini-lesson

  1. Read Oh, the Places You’ll Go! by Dr. Seuss aloud to the class.
  2. Lead a discussion to help students discover the organizational pattern of the text. You may use the following questions:
    • “What is this story about?” (life, challenges, success)
    • “How do we know?” (examples, the final statement)
    • “Does the organization of the book help us to know this? Why?” (yes, because of the repetition and order of events)
  3. Introduce typical organization patterns by drawing the diagrams on the board.
    • Circle (Statement -> example -> details -> statement)
    • Funnel (Major idea -> minor ideas -> small details)
    • Linear (Chronological order)
    • Cause/effect

Guided Practice

  1. Divide the class into four groups.
  2. Ask each group to diagram the plot of Oh, the Places You’ll Go! based on each of the four organizational patterns.
  3. After approximately ten minutes, ask each group to put their 4 diagrams on the board.
  4. Discuss the strengths and weaknesses of each organizational pattern. You may ask some of the following questions:
    • “What parts of the book are left out in each of the patterns?”
    • “What are the strengths of each pattern?”
    • “What are the weaknesses?”
    • “Which pattern best applies to this text?”
  5. Emphasize that one pattern does not work for all texts.

Independent Practice

  1. In small groups, have students use one of the 4 organizational patterns above to create their own children’s books about success.
  2. Assign each group to use a different organizational pattern for their book. Some questions to prompt their thinking include:
    • “What is success?”
    • “What is the most difficult part about succeeding?”
    • “What is difficult for a child to understand about success? How could you simplify that?”
    • Students should use the white paper to create not only a story but also illustrations.

Closure

  1. Ask students to share their children’s books.
  2. Have students compare the advantages and disadvantages of each of the four patterns for their success books.
  3. Compile their books into a classroom library that can be read before class begins or during “spare” time. Or have students share their books with a kindergarten or first grade class or student.

Assessment

  • Have students assess each other’s children’s books for an organizational pattern and its effectiveness.
  • Observe class participation, monitoring for comprehension and engagement.
  • Students could also vote for most effective, most engaging, and other “awards” for the books.

Supplemental information

This lesson could easily be adapted or used as is at various grade levels.

Comments

This lesson was created as part of the NCDPI Writing Lessons for Writing Features Workshop. (Organization)

North Carolina curriculum alignment

English Language Arts (2004)

Grade 10

  • Goal 4: The learner will critically interpret and evaluate experiences, literature, language, and ideas.
    • Objective 4.03: Analyze the ideas of others by identifying the ways in which writers:
      • introduce and develop a main idea.
      • choose and incorporate significant, supporting, relevant details.
      • relate the structure/organization to the ideas.
      • use effective word choice as a basis for coherence.
      • achieve a sense of completeness and closure.
  • Goal 6: The learner will apply conventions of grammar and language usage.
    • Objective 6.01: Demonstrate an understanding of conventional written and spoken expression by:
      • employing varying sentence structures (e.g., inversion, introductory phrases) and sentence types (e.g., simple, compound, complex, compound-complex).
      • analyzing authors' choice of words, sentence structure, and use of language.
      • using word recognition strategies to understand vocabulary and exact word choice (Greek, Latin roots and affixes, analogies, idioms, denotation, connotation).
      • examining textual and classroom language for elements such as idioms, denotation, and connotation to apply effectively in own writing/speaking.
      • using correct form/format for essays, business letters, research papers, bibliographies.
      • using language effectively to create mood and tone.

  • Common Core State Standards
    • English Language Arts (2010)
      • Reading: Literature

        • Grade 9-10
          • 9-10.RL.2 Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.
          • 9-10.RL.5 Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure a text, order events within it (e.g., parallel plots), and manipulate time (e.g., pacing, flashbacks) create such effects as mystery, tension, or surprise.
        • Speaking & Listening

          • 9-10.SL.1 Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 9–10 topics, texts, and issues, building on others’ ideas and expressing their own clearly and...